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Editing Services

​Literary agents commonly request first chapters or first 50 page samples as part of your query package. I’ll help refine yours into a sharp, engaging opening that makes a confident first impression on agents and readers – all while staying true to your voice.

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My feedback is clear and actionable, so you know exactly what to tackle first – without overwhelm. Every critique includes your story's biggest strengths, top 2-3 issues to focus on, and clear next steps.

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I am also open to discussing full manuscript developmental edits for projects that feel like the right fit (contemporary young adult is my sweet spot).

Please inquire if interested!

Please note:

I am not the right editor for:

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  • Novels-in-verse, poetry collections

  • Screenplays

  • Academic writing

  • Dark romance or erotica

  • Manuscripts that glorify nonconsensual sex or violence against marginalized communities

First Chapter Critique

$75

For writers preparing to query or seeking feedback on if their opening grabs a reader’s attention.

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  • Up to 5,000 words

  • You'll receive:

    • Margin and in-line comments via Track Changes

      • (Focus on developmental feedback, not line edits)

    • A concise editorial letter summarizing chapter's strengths and prioritized revision suggestions – so you know what to focus on first. 

      • Chapter’s hook and stakes

      • Protagonist introduction (including establishing what the character wants) and point of view clarity

      • Conflict and tension

      • Setting/worldbuilding

  • Turnaround time: 10-14 days

  • One round of follow-up questions/clarifications (within 30 days of receiving editorial letter)

First 50 Pages Critique

$250

​For writers looking for big picture developmental feedback on their story’s foundation.

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  • Up to 15,000 words

  • You'll receive:

    • Margin and in-line comments via Track Changes

      • Focus on developmental feedback, not line edits

    • A detailed editorial letter with a revision action plan addressing:

      • Plot arc and stakes escalation

      • Character motivation and development

      • Pacing

      • Voice and tone

      • Setting/worldbuilding

      • Dialogue

      • Actionable revision suggestions

  • Turnaround time: 2-3 weeks

  • One round of follow-up questions/clarifications (within 30 days of receiving editorial letter)

Get in Touch

Ready to make the most of your writing time? Fill out the contact form and see if we're a good fit to work together.

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